Sunday, December 11, 2011

Can you rate my short story on a scale on 1-10 please?

the whole thing is kinda cool cuz its weird (in a good way!) because you dont know whats going on. i think you should definitely use a new technique! hearing "and" and "but" over and over and over again made it difficult to continue reading.. besides that you have a good idea there!

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